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Cut (the Drawing)
Started by Zephyric, Aug 03 2009 01:14 AM
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Posted 29 March 2010 - 02:35 PM
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It's Mary Poppins bitches
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Posted 29 March 2010 - 03:17 PM
Exactly.This poem and drawing were great.
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Posted 29 March 2010 - 11:49 PM
Sorry for the spelling, and I'm not the only one who thinks it's awful.
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It's Mary Poppins bitches
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Posted 30 March 2010 - 12:14 AM
Everyone has their own opinion. If yours is that its sucks so be it.
Guys everyone is entitled to their own opinion (although I don't agree with his) leave him be.
Guys everyone is entitled to their own opinion (although I don't agree with his) leave him be.
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Posted 30 March 2010 - 02:09 AM
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Just to clear things up, the drawing was meant to be rough and not neat. And thanks for all the constructive criticism (yeah, I think I'll call it that from now on). It'll come in handy, I'm sure.
Just to clear things up, the drawing was meant to be rough and not neat. And thanks for all the constructive criticism (yeah, I think I'll call it that from now on). It'll come in handy, I'm sure.
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Posted 27 November 2010 - 04:01 PM
zephYr_o3, on Aug 3 2009, 01:14 AM, said:
Deagon requested an illustration for one of his brilliant poems.. My drawing is a bit crappy... But here it is along with the poem.
--CUT
by Deagon--
A slight of hand is all it takes
To break the skin
To free the pain
Let it run let it flow
Cut it deep cut it slow
To see the golden oval glow
To slowly fall
The depths I'll know
In darkness I'll fall
No hand to hold
Death awaits me alone I will go
Cut it deep cut it slow
Cut it right no pain I'll know
From this world I leave
dark tears remain
No friends I know
No rain will fall
No wind will blow
No cold shall I feel
The pain will go
Cut it deep cut it slow
My pain it hurts my pain is real
My heart its broken it quietly weeps
Red tears still fall
From my sore torn heart
Red tears will fall for ever more
My hand held out
While still I fall
Alone and cold
No other to hold
No warmth it feels and always so cold
The red river flows
From out my veins
Along with it goes
My hopes and dreams
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--CUT
by Deagon--
A slight of hand is all it takes
To break the skin
To free the pain
Let it run let it flow
Cut it deep cut it slow
To see the golden oval glow
To slowly fall
The depths I'll know
In darkness I'll fall
No hand to hold
Death awaits me alone I will go
Cut it deep cut it slow
Cut it right no pain I'll know
From this world I leave
dark tears remain
No friends I know
No rain will fall
No wind will blow
No cold shall I feel
The pain will go
Cut it deep cut it slow
My pain it hurts my pain is real
My heart its broken it quietly weeps
Red tears still fall
From my sore torn heart
Red tears will fall for ever more
My hand held out
While still I fall
Alone and cold
No other to hold
No warmth it feels and always so cold
The red river flows
From out my veins
Along with it goes
My hopes and dreams
***
amazing artwork and poetry by two amazing artists,in all ways. thats the way id think of it. WELL DONE
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Posted 14 June 2011 - 12:49 AM
wow.. I like the illustration, but the poem 
it's breathtaking.
And I'm sayign this cause I've been through stuff and I know!
it's breathtaking.And I'm sayign this cause I've been through stuff and I know!
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